literature

What I Wouldn't Give

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A name that make me weak
Your name makes me tremble
I have always desired
I have always wanted
You
What I wouldn't give
To submit to
You
Your breath on my neck
Your body close to mine
Your hands in my hair
What I wouldn't give
To be in your bed
In your control
The thoughts make me weak
My knees start to tremble
I want to hear your voice
Whisper in my ear
Feel your skin against mine
Your lips against mine
My hands scrolling across your skin
Slowly moving down your torso
You press your lips to my neck
Push me back towards your bed
I sit on the edge
Look up into your eyes
Slowly bite my lip
Your eyes filled with lust
You remove your tie
Place it over my eyes
Push me back onto the bed
Your fingers trailing down my body
I'm shaking with anticipation
So this is my first attempt at anything like this and also my first time writing in a really long time. I will gladly welcome feedback. I'm really rusty and I just didn't know how to keep going. I hope this isn't too awful.
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CutToTheSex's avatar
I really enjoyed the poem. You don't seem rusty to me.